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Hi, I'm not good at formal critiques, I never liked them during school. My only advice in this composition is to try cropping the scooter out, I feel the focus should be on the vertical lines allow your eye to move to the sensuous curves of the mans legs to the bench connection. I held my hand up and closed one eye and blocked out the scooter and it felt right. Of course this is just my eye, I love your work and I think your id photo is really cleaver and hot! best of luck on your photography.